Tuesday, July 24, 2007

Darkness

I can see nothing
Not the next person
The darkness resides everywhere
I can not leave

4 comments:

The It Blog said...

That's scary but I think that at the end you should reveal what you are actually talking about ... just a thought. [:

Maria said...

Yeah... what are you talking about? It's kind of unclear...

Gina said...

Maybe it would be clearer if you made it a 4x4x4, or changed the title???? The subject matter IS very vague.

Bela said...

I totally agree. But still, it's REALLY deep and I respect that. It keeps the reader wondering what the poem's about: a cliffhanger! Way to go Quinn!!! Great job!!!