Friday, July 20, 2007

The first time

The first time I thought I was in love was magical
The first time my heart beat a little harder
The first time I was really excited
The first time I thought this could go somewhere

My thoughts rushed to that hint of blue
The heat that comes from him after he’s been out
I didn’t think it could be this perfect
The connection we made
The nights out
Even those in and the waiting was not a problem
With a voice that could sing any song

I’ll never forget him
I’ll never forget how he made me feel
When I just had to get away
The one who took me to a different place
So I could escape all that I was feeling

The first time that I actually felt something
The first time that someone had a place inside my heart
The same place I shared in his
The first time I laid eyes on my first car.


Anonymous said...

This is one of my favorite poems!

Anonymous said...

thats really cool! i love the personification of the car! really creative!

Gina said...

Ah ha ha ha... :D LOVE the twist at the end! :)

Maria said...

That was a totally unexpected ending... good!