Monday, July 23, 2007

My head is littered with thoughts that I want to escape me they cloud my judgment don’t allow my real feelings to shine through
My head is littered with events and feelings that aren’t suppose to be there like throwing trash in the recycle bin. The thoughts that are buried under all of this the ideas that I want to shine through

Im a little stuck on a topic so if anyone has any ideas aside from feedback on this piece I would be very greatful anything is good and I really like controversial topics but ones that hit home


Maria said...

The way your words are running together is a really good way to get feelings of panic and/or confusion across. You can totally make this the stereotypical abuse story, or something different... idk. Good job!

Kate said...

I agree with Maria...that's a controversial topic that fits with what you already wrote, but if you stick with that topic you'll have to add more details as to the specific situation..good job so far! :)

Gina said...

I'm hearing someone who's really REALLY over-stressed. :D