Thursday, July 19, 2007

Why is it

Brianne
7-18-07

Why is it I am always shy,
When meeting people,
I don’t know,
I never say anything
Just stare into space
But when I listen,
I hear,
“Are you ok?”


Why is it I can never be late
Just be early
Stick up for myself,
You know,
Fight?


Why can’t I ever win?

4 comments:

mandy said...

i really like this poem, it has a lot of emotions in it. i can relate to it which makes it more meaningful.

Kenzie/Noodle said...

Hey, i see you changed it around. this ones good but the other one was better

Maddie said...

i agree with kenzie/noodle. the first one was so much better. but just becasue it was amazing as a whole

Kate said...

I can absolutely relate to this too, but even if someone couldn't you made the emotions very clear.