The Connecticut Writing Project Young Writers have their own e-anthology of their work. Enjoy!
lol fippy this is funny
Cool! My only comment is that you don't really need the extra commas.
Noah aka Flippy, This is a good! I really like the last stanza esp. the part about the rewards and lords.
This poem is SO unique! I absolutely LOVED it! Keep up the good work!
It's really good except for the last part of the 1st stanza. That part is confusing
Your poem is so unique and entertaining! My only suggestion is to try to clarify the end of the first stanza. :)
Haha... but you do know it's Coca-Cola, not Coco-Cola, because it's not chocolate. :D It would be cool if it were though...
I LOVE this poem! It's just so short, sweet, & to the point!
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