Thursday, July 19, 2007

Harry Potter Villanelle (or however you spell it)

Don’t ignore that careful plead
Snape is your greatest foe
Into darkness don’t recede

Voldomort’s will is for you to bleed
To defeat him how, you must know
Don’t ignore that careful plead

The Dark Lord’s wrath, please exceed
Allies you have in great amounts so
Into darkness don’t recede

Ignore the Death Eater’s choking weed
What predicts death, a crow
Don’t ignore that careful plead

You can conquer fear indeed
To his level don’t stoop so low
Into darkness don’t recede

Hop onto that noble steed
Lumos, will make your wand aglow
Don’t ignore that gentle plead
Into darkness don’t recede

4 comments:

Caitlin said...

I wouldn't change anything. I love how you were still able to rhyme and still manage to keep with the Harry Potter scheme. Good Job :]

Maria said...

Yay, Harry Potter! :D

OMW Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows is out tomorrow!!!!

mandy said...

i am in love with this poem almost as much as HP!!! lol! :)

Heather said...

This is a great poem. I agree with Caitlin by saying that it's amazing how you were able to rhyme while still keeping with the Harry Potter scheme. And I agree with Mandy by saying I am also in love with this poem almost as much as Harry Potter/Daniel Radcliffe!