I can see nothing
Not the next person
The darkness resides everywhere
I can not leave
Not the next person
The darkness resides everywhere
I can not leave
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- Veiled Taboo i didnt finish typin but did finish w...
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4 comments:
That's scary but I think that at the end you should reveal what you are actually talking about ... just a thought. [:
Yeah... what are you talking about? It's kind of unclear...
Maybe it would be clearer if you made it a 4x4x4, or changed the title???? The subject matter IS very vague.
I totally agree. But still, it's REALLY deep and I respect that. It keeps the reader wondering what the poem's about: a cliffhanger! Way to go Quinn!!! Great job!!!
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