Tuesday, July 24, 2007

As I looked in the bathroom mirror
A dreadful scene met my eyes
My hair was screwed
My eyes were droopy
I had just woken up

I had just woken up
My eyes were droopy
My hair was screwed
A dreadful scene met my eyes
As I looked in the bathroom mirror

4 comments:

The It Blog said...

i like this a lot more as a mirror poem! great job, noodle! ♥

Gina said...

Nice mirror- maybe add more, so that it will have a little twist in the second stanza?

Maria said...

LOVE it as a mirror!

Maddie said...

noodle, wow, just wow. i love how it's a mirror. it's pretty much perfect