The Connecticut Writing Project Young Writers have their own e-anthology of their work. Enjoy!
Give and TakeJessKattLife’s a bitchPoint blankIt’s all about give and takeLike whenIt gives you all this shitThen takes away the thingsAnd the peopleThat help you deal with it.
Do you mean "It gives you all this shit"?I like that this is so succinct.
I don't think that the language that you use in the poem is appropriate. I think you could easily replace those words without having to use such profanity. This is supposed to be a blog for young and old kids. Please refrain from profanity.
I think she's just telling it like it is, first anonymous person. That's the tone of this piece.
its good jessica. don't change it. it's something u can relate to. 1rst anonymous person, its good, and little kids aren't on this.
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