Thursday, July 26, 2007

Give and Take

Give and Take

Life’s a bitch
Point blank
It’s all about give and take
Like when
It gives you all this shit
Then takes away the things
And the people
That help you deal with it.


Gina said...

Do you mean "It gives you all this shit"?

I like that this is so succinct.

Anonymous said...

I don't think that the language that you use in the poem is appropriate. I think you could easily replace those words without having to use such profanity. This is supposed to be a blog for young and old kids. Please refrain from profanity.

Maria said...


Anonymous said...

I think she's just telling it like it is, first anonymous person. That's the tone of this piece.

Maddie said...

its good jessica. don't change it. it's something u can relate to. 1rst anonymous person, its good, and little kids aren't on this.