Tuesday, July 24, 2007

The Woods

The Darkness lurked behind me
Behind the trees and leaves
Animals run wild and free
I crash through the wilderness
Away from Life or Death
Away from life or death
I crash through the wilderness
Animals run wild and free
Behind the trees and leaves
The Darkness lurked behind me.

4 comments:

Maria said...

Are you describing getting away from everything? I don't understand what the whole "Darkness" thing is...

By the way, this would be excellent as a mirror poem.

noah2413 said...

here's a second stanza for this poem to make it into a mirror.
----------------------------
Away from life or death,
i crash through the wilderness,
animals run wild and free.
Behind the trees and leaves,
the Darkness lurked behind me.

Gina said...

Better as a mirror- good job!

Gina said...

Maybe combine it with Quinn's darkness poem... lol