How have I
ended up here?
In this place
I do not belong?
Where Vineyard Vines
tote bags
reign
and
polo shirts are
nearly mandatory?
Where overpriced clothes
are the fashion, and
gas costs $3.47?
Where other 6th graders
have drivers, and
wear designer clothes?
How have I
ended up here?
In this place
I call home?
Should I change the last stanza to make it all one big block?
Thursday, July 12, 2007
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4 comments:
you could just put the last stanza with the rest, but it works either way. If you aren't sure, leave it as it is.
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the line or whatever "vineyard vines"
yea. i love it all ahaha
I think it sounds really good! I know what ya mean from past experiences so, yea. Maybe you should move your last stanza up to combine it. It might look better.
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