Tuesday, July 10, 2007

The Greatest Backstab

The Greatest Backstab



Chapter 1: The Surprise

As the tide came in on one of Top Sail Island best beaches , Holly a 17 year old girl with dirty blonde hair that shined like the sun and blue eyes that looked like the heart of the ocean, sat in a place where the crystal turquoise ocean water just barely touched her perfectly polished toe nails. Holly looked into the distance and spotted two baby birds. All of a sudden she picked up a handful of pebbles and through them out into the ocean in great anger. As the pebbles slowly drifted back to shore, she felt another presence in the area. Slowly she turned her head. A shocked looked appeared on her face. “Hey.” Depressed foot ball captain Greg mumbled. Greg was every girls dream date. With his flowing ear length milk chocolate hair and with his bright brown eyes no one could resist his over throwing charm. While Holly was still in shock, Greg waved his hand in front of her face like a master commanding a dog to leave. When Holly was done staring at Greg, she thought that she had been dreaming. Finally she answered him. As she stuttered Holly replied, “What are you doing here?” When Greg heard that he looked as if he had just seen a flying saucer. “What are you talking about, you practically told me to follow you?” Greg remarked in an unsatisfying tone. “I can’t believe she did that.” Holly muttered to herself. It was the end of the year school field trip and Holly’s friend had told her deepest darkest secret to Holly’s crush.




Chapter 2: The Fight

What would possess someone to tell a friends deepest darkest secret. After they promise they wouldn’t tell. Who knows? Anyway Sarah had blurted out Holly’s secret. She was in love with Greg. After Holly heard about it, she ran as far as she could run, crying her eyes out with that in mind Sarah didn’t even care that she just caused a friend social suicide. When Greg the hottest guy at school found out that, that was Holly’s secret he chased after her. When Greg started to run Sarah called out to him “Wait don’t you want a real woman?” Greg screamed back into the distance “As long as that woman is not you.” Sarah was used to getting everything she ever wanted, except her mom died when she was little and her Dad never stays in the same place. They always moved. So Sarah was always the new rich white kid in the Prep school. Sitting on the cold wet beach as the slow seconds pass by, someone’s shadow appeared. It was Chris. Chris was Greg’s wingman. Holly and Greg both turned around and smiled. “What are you two so happy about?” Chris questioned with fear. Greg replied with glee “well Holly and I are kind of a couple now.” Chris’s face went into shock. During that period of time Holly and Greg never stopped smiling. After a while Chris came back to reality. “Dude I hope you realize that you have only dated cheerleaders before.” Chris warned Greg. Greg replied with confidence “I know.”
“Okay, if you’re sure.” Chris said in a very unsure tone while shrugging those muscular arms. Greg and Holly looked at each other uncertain of their future.

5 comments:

Andie said...

That was so...Degrassi. You know, entertaing but I would never admit it lol.

Anonymous said...

As I said on your continued 'Greatest Backstab', it's funny, but strange. Especially the whole thing about Greg being bi, (which isn't included in these chapters). Anyway, it's good.

Maria - Broadwaygal said...

What was the strangest thing about the story? Because i know there are a lot of strange parts. What was the funniest part? Again I know there are a lot of funny parts but please pick one.

Rachel I said...

i've only read the first two chapters and already i want to hear more! sometimes it's a little hard to follow what's happening. but keep writing!

Gina said...

That was very interesting... but I couldn't understand anything that was going on. Sorry. You should probably work on the punctuation in the beginnings of both chapters.

Did you post the rest of it? I'll go look now.

Cheers!