That time I thought I was in love.
He was perfect, he seemed to have no flaws,
until the day he cheated.
Why did I take him back?
I really thought I loved him enough to
accept his apology.
But the apologies became more and more frequent.
My mind was telling me to let him go,
but my heart kept telling me no.
And so the months dragged on.
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I totally love this one! :D
It's so awesome lmao
Kewlie! :D
- Vianca
Emily, this says so much, and I can tell you felt hurt. There is a great YA book called Fault Line that deals with the the question, "Where does a girl draw a line in the sand with a guy?" You might enjoy read it! Keep up the good work! Fondly, Lynn
i really like this poem. you could even make another stanza, beginning with the last line of what you've written, that says what you eventually decide to do, dump him or stay with him. Also, in one of lines you wrote 'kep' and it should probably be 'kept'.
Did you think about making the first line end with an ellipse instead of a period? That might make it start the flow of the poem more. I like how you're asking yourself questions throughout the poem- it makes it so much more personal.
I love the story
it is so cool. <3
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