tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post8660906668844295736..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-8143953030454855832007-07-24T10:45:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:45:00.000-04:00I'm hearing someone who's really REALLY over-stres...I'm hearing someone who's really REALLY over-stressed. :DGinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-44223682263511389312007-07-24T10:21:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:21:00.000-04:00I agree with Maria...that's a controversial topic ...I agree with Maria...that's a controversial topic that fits with what you already wrote, but if you stick with that topic you'll have to add more details as to the specific situation..good job so far! :)Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11536565768938435083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-7238639275110625782007-07-24T10:13:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:13:00.000-04:00The way your words are running together is a reall...The way your words are running together is a really good way to get feelings of panic and/or confusion across. You can totally make this the stereotypical abuse story, or something different... idk. Good job!Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.com