Give and Take
JessKatt
Life’s a bitch
Point blank
It’s all about give and take
Like when
It gives you all this shit
Then takes away the things
And the people
That help you deal with it.
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5 comments:
Do you mean "It gives you all this shit"?
I like that this is so succinct.
I don't think that the language that you use in the poem is appropriate. I think you could easily replace those words without having to use such profanity. This is supposed to be a blog for young and old kids. Please refrain from profanity.
Depressing...
I think she's just telling it like it is, first anonymous person. That's the tone of this piece.
its good jessica. don't change it. it's something u can relate to. 1rst anonymous person, its good, and little kids aren't on this.
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