Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Regarding Your Jeans

I tried to stop myself, I really did try

but the water was so inviting

and the air was so humid

and I knew they were your jeans

that you had bought just

two weeks ago from our

favorite store

and I think most of the

saltwater smell will come out

in the wash. I’m sorry.

Next time

you should jump in with me.


Anonymous said...

I like it but i think it was kind of confusing cause at first i didn't understand were or why you jumped in the water until the end

Anonymous said...

Ilke it because you told where you got your jeans from an when yo got them

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Smita said...

this was quiet a poetry ;) hehehe
just blogwalking :)