Sunday, June 28, 2009

There was a Time

There was a time when you cherished me
When you held me high above everyone else
When you worshiped me

There was a time when we were best friends
When we could talk for hours and still have more to say
When you loved me.

There was a time when I was only your's
When I saw, no one else
When did this end?

There you were, standing in my life
When you left, it was empty
When you left, I was happy

There was a time when we both had passion
When colors looked brighter and love was real
When the moon was so far we couldn't believe people could reach it

There was a time when we were younger
When none of these shenanigans went on
When we were innocent and looked at the stars

There was time, in a parking lot I walked through last week
When we laid on the ground and looked up
When we fell in love

1 comment:

Maddie said...

This is an incredible poem in my opinion... i love the how the stanzas were set up... a few lines were absolutely incredible, such as "There was a time when we both had passion
When colors looked brighter and love was real
When the moon was so far we couldn't believe people could reach it" and "There was time, in a parking lot I walked through last week
When we laid on the ground and looked up
When we fell in love" those were the 2 stanzas that really stood out. nice job, the voice is very strong here...