I tried to stop myself, I really did try
but the water was so inviting
and the air was so humid
and I knew they were your jeans
that you had bought just
two weeks ago from our
favorite store
and I think most of the
saltwater smell will come out
in the wash. I’m sorry.
Next time
you should jump in with me.
5 comments:
I like it but i think it was kind of confusing cause at first i didn't understand were or why you jumped in the water until the end
Ilke it because you told where you got your jeans from an when yo got them
your story was great and a little funny and i will send more comments
a nice post, i like it very much.
this was quiet a poetry ;) hehehe
just blogwalking :)
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