Cold white skin
Brushes against mine
As you lean in to me
Your blood stained lips
From the past
Graze my neck
Your teeth get ready
For the pleasure
Your eyes turn black
Your heart is empty
Together
We are lost in the darkness
Of the night
Far from others
Who crowd the street
In the light of day
You’re the only one who
Hears my scream pierce
The silence of the
Nigh
Thursday, July 19, 2007
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6 comments:
I dont' really get what that is about. You should put one or two sentaces taht help the rader distinguish what your talking about.
ACK! Scary... I can feel the scariness! Creeeeeepy! *finds a nice pony & rainbow combo to calm down*
Never mind i reread it and i ge that its about a vampire
Nice imagery, Mandy. I like the blood stained lips part.
ooo W0W; i like it but its creepy. the decription is good. i got a good image of a vampire and a pretty young girl alone deep in the woods... but that's just me
Ya might wanna add the T to "nigh"... other than that, nice creepiness. >:B
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