tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post9005537757834584594..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: Need Title and AdviceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-84494530834337077022007-07-24T10:28:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:28:00.000-04:00http://cwpyoungwriters.blogspot.com/2007/07/villai...http://cwpyoungwriters.blogspot.com/2007/07/villain-villanelle.html<BR/><BR/>I would really appreciate some comments as well on this one... (sorry, ebah, for using your post to promote my own piece, but I <I>really</I> need some constructive criticism on this one!!!)Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-82711435787467829802007-07-24T10:27:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:27:00.000-04:00Now that I think about it, it really does sound li...Now that I think about it, it really does sound like you are describing a sunset, where everything gets dark afterward. (Thanks, Kate!)Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-83731257596078155892007-07-23T11:00:00.001-04:002007-07-23T11:00:00.001-04:00I was a little confused with the last line (are yo...I was a little confused with the last line (are you watching a sunset?). Other than that your details and imagery was really good! :)Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11536565768938435083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-79693483797586793082007-07-23T11:00:00.000-04:002007-07-23T11:00:00.000-04:00Nice jobNice jobMackenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07147402938648601629noreply@blogger.com