tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post8244692389493689652..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: 1:21Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-81834316767868745802008-04-22T16:48:00.000-04:002008-04-22T16:48:00.000-04:00my god maria, even when u dont try u still write s...my god maria, even when u dont try u still write something good. i hav 2 say this isnt your best piece, but it is still a lot better than others ive seen in my life. this is good for a kind of rambleing. u should try 2 fix it a little ans then it would be really good.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-75641789290081998882008-03-21T11:21:00.000-04:002008-03-21T11:21:00.000-04:00This is a very spur-of-the-moment poem, kind of st...This is a very spur-of-the-moment poem, kind of stream of consciousness, in a way. So I guess I could edit it quite a bit. <BR/><BR/>Any suggestions?Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.com