tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post8102690763469621893..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: "the pen is mighter than the sword"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-65085029479959074722008-07-25T11:27:00.000-04:002008-07-25T11:27:00.000-04:00i loved this, you used the mirror technique really...i loved this, you used the mirror technique really well so that there was a slightly different meaning the second time, not just the same thing over again. i also loved the imagery and the use of "quivering", didnt know it could be used in that kind of verb but it works.Emily D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05224183383624563023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-66919769412513276922008-07-24T20:08:00.000-04:002008-07-24T20:08:00.000-04:00This would be a great piece to read out loud. The...This would be a great piece to read out loud. The only thing is that the pen is mightier <I>than</I> the sword (with an a), but other than that you have created a mirror poem that works just as well forwards or backwards. I love that the pen is inflicting the same damages and results as a sword- "double-edged pen" is an ingenious phrase.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-78726152619199051722008-07-24T13:00:00.000-04:002008-07-24T13:00:00.000-04:00the poem is good.....i liked the mirror part it fl...the poem is good.....i liked the mirror part it flows perfectly*Monet*https://www.blogger.com/profile/05627734391607156191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-12994801762402592522008-07-24T12:57:00.000-04:002008-07-24T12:57:00.000-04:00Luke, I love the way you say the double-edged pen ...Luke, I love the way you say the double-edged pen and the ink-stained sword as the same thing and I'm proud to have come up with the title of this amazing piece.Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08907802860031825348noreply@blogger.com