tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post66908289766929694..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: MistakesUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-83967561244250873492008-07-12T10:43:00.000-04:002008-07-12T10:43:00.000-04:00Hush, puppy.(that's my new phrase!)Hush, puppy.<BR/>(that's my new phrase!)Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11221441643994967139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-45802917516189309562008-07-11T21:33:00.000-04:002008-07-11T21:33:00.000-04:00good to know that you appreciate that......(muah h...good to know that you appreciate that......<BR/><BR/>(muah ha ha ha ha)Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-74254704833591950732008-07-11T16:17:00.000-04:002008-07-11T16:17:00.000-04:00Well actually, the point of this poem was to say t...Well actually, the point of this poem was to say things more than describe them. You know, like telling a story.<BR/>But I appreciate the critiquing!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11221441643994967139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-22040753777246410272008-07-10T21:01:00.000-04:002008-07-10T21:01:00.000-04:00you know bela, gina is right. i just didnt want to...you know bela, gina is right. i just didnt want to just come out and sya it but.................<BR/><BR/>it wasn't you. you usually one-up me in most writing, but this just wasn't that great.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-31898437237393270182008-07-10T19:58:00.000-04:002008-07-10T19:58:00.000-04:00That wasn't meant to sound mean. I said all that ...That wasn't meant to sound mean. I said all that with the most caring intentions possible, you know that.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-77791369683555762072008-07-10T19:57:00.000-04:002008-07-10T19:57:00.000-04:00No offense Bela, but I think this is the single mo...No offense Bela, but I think this is the single most clicheed poem you have ever written. You're above using such bland description to force rhymes- you have a better imagination than this. USE IT!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.com