tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post642946797059958404..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: night essay- MadeleineUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-18788984759289105692008-06-01T14:20:00.001-04:002008-06-01T14:20:00.001-04:00put more you in itput more you in itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-82559744670581657782008-06-01T14:20:00.000-04:002008-06-01T14:20:00.000-04:00get more too the pointget more too the pointAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-87658588131932906182008-06-01T14:19:00.000-04:002008-06-01T14:19:00.000-04:00it seems like there are too many quotes.it seems like there are too many quotes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-68107360428350578572008-05-31T12:37:00.000-04:002008-05-31T12:37:00.000-04:00This is for school, right? The one thing I would ...This is for school, right? The one thing I would suggest you change right away (if you haven't handed it in already) is to change some of the sentences in the first paragraph so that you don't say things like "this essay will be about" or something like that. I know from experience that teachers hate when you tell them about what you're going to tell them. They would rather you came right out Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-79318949820298331272008-05-29T16:58:00.000-04:002008-05-29T16:58:00.000-04:00study the verb avoir!!!!!!!!study the verb avoir!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-53602070891986637212008-05-28T19:55:00.000-04:002008-05-28T19:55:00.000-04:00hey, u really like my account. thnx. humph....fren...hey, u really like my account. thnx. humph....french finals... o well, mayb i'll just copy u. jkjkMaddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-522014242783817952008-05-28T18:30:00.000-04:002008-05-28T18:30:00.000-04:00hi maddie itz lauren, i like ur essay. i think tha...hi maddie itz lauren, i like ur essay. i think that there may be one or two run on sentences in the 1st paragraph but u don't have 2 listen to me. itz good anyway!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com