tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post4606240291872309194..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: CWP SonnetUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-34018032067431374432009-03-26T16:00:00.000-04:002009-03-26T16:00:00.000-04:00Yaaaay ME! Haha, just kidding...but not really.I a...Yaaaay ME! Haha, just kidding...but not really.<BR/><BR/>I adore this poem!...Partly because all of us shared the experience! But this really captures the memories of our summers! AMAZING job!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11221441643994967139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-83753974628621349482009-03-19T09:51:00.000-04:002009-03-19T09:51:00.000-04:00hahaha yeah, the iambic pentameter was not require...hahaha yeah, the iambic pentameter was not required for us, nor was it being ten syllabels. we only needed the a,b,a,b... whole thing. i figured out the ten syllabels from looking at bela's sonnet, since i knew that she would have all the requirements.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-15390716880796120242009-03-18T19:59:00.000-04:002009-03-18T19:59:00.000-04:00The reason I mentioned those lines is that they do...The reason I mentioned those lines is that they do not fit into the iambic pentameter, but if that wasn't one of your criteria, nevermind.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-47617518020297263042009-03-18T11:07:00.000-04:002009-03-18T11:07:00.000-04:00thank you!!!! yeahh my attempt was a little iffy, ...thank you!!!! yeahh my attempt was a little iffy, but it took me like 2 hours, and i did manage to keep it 10 syllabels. thank you for checking!!!!Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-87500940772632828452009-03-17T22:27:00.000-04:002009-03-17T22:27:00.000-04:00Not an easy task to complete, but you did it! The...Not an easy task to complete, but you did it! The only lines I question as to whether they fit into the rhyme scheme are the first and 3rd to last lines. Other than that, nice work!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.com