tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post2045295567934972964..comments2023-05-29T05:28:07.235-04:00Comments on CWP Young Writers: Life is (not) BeautifulUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-55911565368455048552007-07-27T10:26:00.000-04:002007-07-27T10:26:00.000-04:00I forgot to say this before- I like the way it all...I forgot to say this before- I like the way it all turns around at the end.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-32612498722879978092007-07-24T10:21:00.001-04:002007-07-24T10:21:00.001-04:00OUCH! :...( That's so sad!!! But I think you sho...OUCH! :...( That's so sad!!! But I think you should change that line, "She takes a shower and cries in the shower" because it's a bit redundant. How about something like, "She cries in the shower/But she thinks it's just hot water" or whatever.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-22545325188716590192007-07-24T10:21:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:21:00.000-04:00no comment. [=no comment. [=Veronikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03075078360376598637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3416648419703683331.post-19426447001451024342007-07-24T10:19:00.000-04:002007-07-24T10:19:00.000-04:00wow... I would tell you this poem is nice, but the...wow... I would tell you this poem is nice, but the kids are so mean I can't say that! I hope this is not from personal experience... deep.Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.com